Question 7 will need refineing

7) On the preliminary task there were several key flaws that in my recent work I have fixed, the layout of my magazine was flawed the first flaw with the preliminary task was that it didn’t have a good colour scheme with similar colours the consumer will have found it hard to adjust to the        un-natural colours that are not very life like but at the same point it wasn’t significantly un-natural colours to the point that it would attract the eye of the consumer. The icon that I used was not good due to the fact that it was all the same colour. In the design that I have now has a good colour scheme as it attracts the eyes of the viewer with an interesting design, the layout is good due to the fact that it attracts the attention of the consumer with its bold black lines however the text unlike the practice task does not blend in with the design but stands out instead. In the read task on each page I added a florescent sound wave in to the background that I made using creative processes in order to achieve an interesting background.